Really deep write can really feel the hurt and loss I can relate!
5/5

I like this. It's very well written and I could feel the emotion. I like the lay out and flow. It's true that woman can just be as spiteful as men and take away people's loves.. I hope this is true for you sweetie. I'm always here.

Danika
xoxox

*Isn't*

Great poem, im sure alot of people can relate to this.

This is a really powerful poem! Rhyme and flow are good and continious. It actually got to me and though I have not been in the situation myself yet, your poem helped me to imagine what it'd be like. Your detailed description and your choice of words fit perfectly to the content.I'm actually speechless.

Really good, I haven't been in this situation but as i was reading i was imaging it somehow.

Perhaps change "my" to me… typo in the first sentence…

But she had my blinded
She had me fooled to my core
I was looking for peace but
She started a war.

Very well written... thumbs up.... :D
well we can't help it,, there are silly women out there who loves to ruin somebody's life ...

well there is so called "KARMA" so for sure they'll tast

I mean,, for sure they'll taste their own medicine someday.. :)

Hey!!!

What a poem!

I loved it and could relate to it definitely. I have had my ex's cheat on me before but I've never known who with though, but the emotions of betrayal are still strong.

I got angry reading this thinking what a bit@& to do this to you, both the man and the girl.

I felt everything.

Well written
x

Sounds like a true life experience that only time will heal.A nice poem straight from the heart,well done.Thanks also for leaving positive comment on one of my poems.

Very nice flow and there is feeling under the line it's subtle but there.

There are jus some girls out there that dnt even care about the men they take,,,they only take them to ruin the good relationship he had going. it is a shame that happened to you. :( good job! :)