A Reverie

by Ramblings of an ageing Kid   May 16, 2011


A Reverie ... soon to never whisper in my head
I wish my mind would align there with the dead
And the broken mantras by warlocks left unread
It is in my head

Love ... is a need, not a creed for all I've cared
Stemming from a lustful anger left unbeared
Yet you still pound you sinful heart, you never dared
I ceased to stare

Whatever you touch, you turn blue
Lives you drained, the smiles you fainted all to gloom
Rise to kill and yield your corpses as you scream
You wish to remit the curse that let you be

And it was all a reverie
It was all a reverie

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  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Whatever you touch, you turn blue
    Lives you drained, the smiles you fainted all to gloom
    Rise to kill and yield your corpses as you scream
    You wish to remit the curse that let you be

    *This was my favorite part. It was worder perfectly. The way you speak of this person is so well expressed. Love the metaphors and how subtle they are. Very nice work. -Nik

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    I love this poem so true and touchful
    well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Love ... is a need, not a creed for all I've cared
    ^^
    Those lines are soooo true

    and I particullary loved the repitition on the ast two lines ..

    Keep it up with the good poems -_^

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