Comments : A Reverie

  • 12 years ago

    by Meme

    Love ... is a need, not a creed for all I've cared
    ^^
    Those lines are soooo true

    and I particullary loved the repitition on the ast two lines ..

    Keep it up with the good poems -_^

  • 12 years ago

    by mira

    I love this poem so true and touchful
    well done

  • 12 years ago

    by Lady Nik

    Whatever you touch, you turn blue
    Lives you drained, the smiles you fainted all to gloom
    Rise to kill and yield your corpses as you scream
    You wish to remit the curse that let you be

    *This was my favorite part. It was worder perfectly. The way you speak of this person is so well expressed. Love the metaphors and how subtle they are. Very nice work. -Nik