Comments : Adoption isn't easy

  • 12 years ago

    by Gravity

    This mother has a very strong love for the daughter she cannot have. but she is at peace because her daughter with be loved.

    It is sad, and happy.
    really nice.

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by WintersAngel

    This is sad and heartbreaking. The pain is well expressed in this piece. Wonderful write.

  • 10 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    Aw, this is so sad, I feel so sad that you had to make such a hard choice; although, this makes me sad I would be sadder if you would've had an abortion.

    Well written...AL

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Wow this poem touched my heart

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Second stanza: "wont" should be "won't".
    fifth stanza: "thats" should be "that's".

    I really have no other suggestions, the flow was nice in this poem and if this is what you've gone through, I think there is a tangible strength to do what is best for the child, even if it's the hardest. I admire that and I can't even imagine how beautiful it would be to become a mother, but how difficult and how much you would miss your baby giving it up for adoption. Such a heartfelt, loving poem with a lot of hurt, but I nodded my head in agreement when you said she'll still be your daughter, and she will be loved, never forget that. I'm sure you took the time to find her the best place she could be and that takes courage.

    Emotional write, take care.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lori Lee

    This was very emotional..very sad, but touching..5/5