What is wrong with him?

by Holly   Jun 3, 2011


What is wrong with him?
He makes me cry,
He makes me try.
But still he is not satisfied!
She knows I have tried,
She wishes so dearly
That my trying would not make me so weary!
He does not know me,
He does not deserve to be on my family tree!
So please if you are reading,
Know that I am crying,
For it is you who has caused grief to appear in my life.
Now I know that my pain shall not be unknown to you,
I would like to say something to you.
That something is that
I do my fair share and more,
Pick up your load and learn some respect for your
DAUGHTER!

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  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    @Natasha I updated my profile couple weeks back and am 10 now, I've been that old since February!

  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    Thanks natasha!

  • 12 years ago

    by natasha

    This is a very beautiful poem. Im inpressed. i dont think i would write that well of a poem at 9. loved it you got my vote. a 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparkling snow flake

    And she is right they are AWESOME!

  • 12 years ago

    by Holly

    5 poems now!