The title pulled me to this poem, the words so beautiful kept me here. The flow was as smooth as the emotions you penned

Erotic piece....i love the sensationalism..two thumbs up!!!

This is the cheesiest poem i have ever read u amadan get a real life i reckon u are seventeen years old

This nice....I liked it....you admire beauty.... there nothing wrong with that:) keep writting: )

The title to this really captured my attention and the poem did not fail me XD