Beautiful written, and so sad. 5/5

mandy :)

God sends an angel in everyone's life and takes them back suddenly,when we start taking things for granted.This is a reminder to us: nothing lasts forver.It is human nature to crave and lament on things,when they are gone.Sad but true.

I liked your choice of words.Thoughtfully crafted piece

Wow!! This is beautiful!! I love this. Though I am sorry your angel was taken away, we all lose an angel sooner or later though. I know I did.

Your emotions are honest and direct. I really feel the pain when I read your poetry

We still wonder upon this day
why we had to get punished
why oh almighty, when all we did
was admire the beauty
God giveth upon thy face
- my fave but I loved every part terrific poem :) :) 10 stars 5/5

Beautiful yet sad. Heartfelt as well.

I love this poem. So very heartfelt and yes, so very sad.

A year has gone by, ever so quickly
since we first saw that smile
upon an angel from heaven
descended upon us
to bring warmth to our hearts
and love to our soul

^^^^^^

When I read the first part I felt like crying straight away. Forbsome reason the image of a child came to me.
I am not sure if it was a child but it was my first impression.

It is always hard to lose someone especially when they are so close to and apart of who you are.

I felt every word.

Well written

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