Comments : Skeptical Christian

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Wow, this was so alluring..
    You really have a talent as you nail each idea you discuss..
    "I never was a faithful soul,
    I followed many earthly goals.
    I traveled roads of empty dreams,
    Fueled by high and mighty schemes."
    The opening was brilliant.. Up to the point,,, 'I followed many earthly goals..' - I wonder how much we do that per hour!

    And it was epic the way you ended it:
    "They chronicle the path I've trod,
    From skeptic to a man of God,
    Everything He shared with me
    Is found within my poetry. "

    'From skeptic to a man of God' - Awesome conclusion! ..
    Again, the rhyming and wording were flawless!
    SO MOVING!

    5/5