Comments : Moments Memory

  • 7 years ago

    by Marionette

    Unexpected.. I loved it o.o

  • 7 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I have chills reading this, a sign of a good write, Unexpected was right.
    You had the reader going one way mentally then took a sharp turn into deep sadness great job
    Connie

  • 6 years ago

    by Hollow Face

    This is a very deep and sad piece. Unexpected as they all say. I know what it's like to lose someone so fast. I love it.
    5/5
    ~Kitty

  • 6 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    Wow deeply emotional, and clever too.......if you need to talk im here for you
    p.s.i didnt mean to make that ryme......im dr.suess today i guess