Unexpected.. I loved it o.o

I have chills reading this, a sign of a good write, Unexpected was right.
You had the reader going one way mentally then took a sharp turn into deep sadness great job
Connie

This is a very deep and sad piece. Unexpected as they all say. I know what it's like to lose someone so fast. I love it.
5/5
~Kitty

Wow deeply emotional, and clever too.......if you need to talk im here for you
p.s.i didnt mean to make that ryme......im dr.suess today i guess