Comments : Summer(Tanka)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kuro

    Very eloquent wording. gives a sense of unrest, but it is somehow calming. its hard to explain. nice write.

    ~kuro

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Sounds like the summer is not only creating
    scorching heat but also a wild fire..nicely done with this form!