Comments : Convert Reality

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I thought this one was very creative. I loved how you it explains your reality and how u want the person u love to convert all the pain & unhappy moments to happy ones. Also loved the line special love glue. Never seen that before in a poem, very clever. 5/5. Great write again!

  • 12 years ago

    by mandy

    Beautiful write.

    I liked how raw and real this is. Everyone wants things to work out, and even if they don't and we know they won't, we wish for it anyways.

    Wonderful work, 5/5

    mandy :)