Wilting flowers among the dirt

Wow...very touching. I enjoy what you have just enough of the abstract in your poems. beautiful and sad. 5/5

Honestly, I like so much these descriptive verses you structured well here :)

It's somehow complicated, but I managed!

Amazing.

Perfect

A hard subject to write about but you pulled it off, a very well written descriptive poem, 5/5

You do a really good job at setting the mood with your vivid descriptions of a scene at a cemetery, from the point of view of the newly deceased occupant.

As for critique, "scared" should be "scarred." I would also get rid of the periods, since you seem to use them randomly, and the few you use, seem to interrupt the flow.

I would eliminate this line, because the reader already knows someone died, and it is not necessary to say it:
"blanketing the newest occupant."

Actually, after having read this a couple of times, it is not clear that this is from the point of view of the deceased. I think you could rewrite it a bit to help clarify that.

Overall, a really nice write from you. :)