Candid

Great Poem!!!! Nice Work!!
5/5 :)

^Agreed :)
The only thing I will add is to remove the capital letters at the beginning of the lines. They are not needed and really do not fit into the easy eyes.

Love
Tara

Hey there!
I remember you asked me for m opinions about your writes, right? and here I am givin them! :)
and in my opinion, this piece is something worth a nomination and is going to be nominated the next week, so everyone can read it! :)

Do you remember the day
That everyone was
Dead or dumb?
That cat whose ninth life
lived out on tilt
^^^

that is sooo well-expressed and I so love it.
a very nice opening, though the poem was short but it made me feel inspired. :)

there are some metaphors that I didn't really understand, I will PM you asking 'bout them...;)

five and a nomination!