Comments : Temporary Heart

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Your write seemed so clear in content. But the last line was amazing, it really hit me..Loved this

    You must have a
    temporary heart
    that grows from love
    but dissolves from anger.

    Super write
    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by White Orchid

    I loved this! I loved the first stanza where you explained how you get goosebumps from two completely different emotions. I thought that was unique and creative. Nice write.