I love this! I know you've been saying that you've been wanting or needing to write or having ideas, as have I. Sometimes poetry lives within us, sometimes we live through it.

"although,
they
fail to realize
that I do not have the time.."

This piece hit my life spot on, I have all these things I want to do, write and say, if only these words would realize I do not have the time to write them now! Amazing poetry, Yaki :)

Yakz, you are refreshing, haven't anyone told you that before? :)

a perfect piece, sistah.
With love.

Noura

This is just amazing! a 5/5 and if I had a nomination I would give it right away, anyway your poem is suggested for our senior members in the club along with some other worth it poems.. and i honestly hope it'll win!

5/5

Lol, don't pay too much with your newly found freedom :P and it seems like you have partied a lot these days :P, lol, kidding aside, love this poem a lot. I can tell from this piece and its structure and word choice that as a writer you have already grown and moved on to further your skills. :D Nice :D

Great!