I am taken by this Poem. The simplicity and depth are amazing. Comparable to a very famous Poet of the past. I enjoyed its alliteration,assonance and slant ryhme. I would capitalize love though, were it mine. It is a beautiful Poem, just beautiful.
Peace and Blessings

Very Nicely Done!!!

This is magnificent! You have done a fabulous job with the imagery and the scene. Oh let me just put it this way, Wonderful!!

Well written, short and beautiful, description was great.... good job

I believe the moon is perfect, but I still love your analogy. Well written!

Beautiful <3