Just another lie

by believeinlove87   Aug 4, 2011


All you ever did was lie to me,
I"ll never hurt you,
just another lie.
I promise ill always be there for you,
Again just another lie.

You swore up and down i was the one,
you said you never felt this way before,
Just another lie.

I told you i love you,
you said it back,
I told you i missed you,
you said you missed me more then i could know.

Again just another lie.
Everything you ever told me was a lie,
Why you did?
I'll never know,
All i know it was just another lie.

I'm new to poetry, I've never really written it before. So i know im not that good...But im working on it :)
Any tips,suggestions as how to write good poetry would help :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by ChrisT

    All poetry is good poetry just keep writing and youll feel better and better as time goes on :) great poem keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Are u kidding ur great and each one gets better as u go and stick to how u feel it will lead u in the right direction :) I <3 it 5/5 ur doing great :)

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Yes it is... But in the end it makes you a way stronger person<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    The crushing feeling of being betrayed.
    The empty promises that cut deeper than any knife could ever dream of doing. Truly Amazing as it is sad.

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I'm sorry you feel this way. It is wonderful!! Great job!

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