Comments : Just another lie

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I'm sorry you feel this way. It is wonderful!! Great job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Jack Nightengale

    The crushing feeling of being betrayed.
    The empty promises that cut deeper than any knife could ever dream of doing. Truly Amazing as it is sad.

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Yes it is... But in the end it makes you a way stronger person<3

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Are u kidding ur great and each one gets better as u go and stick to how u feel it will lead u in the right direction :) I <3 it 5/5 ur doing great :)

  • 12 years ago

    by ChrisT

    All poetry is good poetry just keep writing and youll feel better and better as time goes on :) great poem keep it up