Dream Chasing

by Aaron   Aug 4, 2011


Dream chasing
or is it chasing dreams;
running around,
endless in my mind it seems,
always coming close
yet I come up short,
what does it mean?
what does this mean?

Am I a fool to chase
what I can not have?
is this how, my, life shall be?
is this what's destined for me?
chasing dreams, dream chasing;
run as fast as I may,
as I sleep where I lay
not being able to catch my dreams-
when they come my way.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    This was really good a clever way to propose thinking for the reader. The idea of dream chasing and chasing dreams being turned into 2 different things is very good and you done well to write about this.

    The ending was like you are at a place in your life where you want to give up, perhaps you are having no luck with a certain dream you have been chasing? Don't give up, dreams are only dreams if we chase them.

    Nice work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I really loved this poem and enjoyed reading it :) great flow great rhyme and wording is good :) fantastic job :) 5/5
    My favorite parts:
    is this how, my, life shall be?
    is this what's destined for me?

    running around,
    endless in my mind it seems,
    always coming close
    yet I come up short,

    Once again I loved it :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Kips2.0

    You're pretty good with words. Well fashioned and good message.

  • 12 years ago

    by Brianna

    Im absoulutly in love with thiss !

  • 12 years ago

    by Brianna

    Im absoulutly in love with thiss !

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