Frozen Dreams

by Dark Shadows   Aug 5, 2011


Heart as cold as ice
Mind messed up

Heart burns
With Feelings

Flying high
Touch the sky
Vast and immense

Wings delicate and broken
sky comes falling down

Touch the sun
big and shining
Will it burn me?

Hold fast
Dreams on fire
Fears rising

Confused and unsettled
Doubtful and puzzled
I wake up to reality

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  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Wow this poem is great:)
    Gd job 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Hmm...appericiated !
    The unstable state of mind and the inner potentials rising....made through little but quality writing..!

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    So, when despair set in, when love is unfulfilled, emotions flows go from North to South in a Poet's mind. But, that is exactly where our inner strength matters. Those who fall, write sad poetry. Those who move on will be our inspiration against odds and failures in our life.

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Excellent! This is creative, and strong and sort of unique. I really like this piece and think you have done a wonderful job with very few words.

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