I love love love love this<3 Favorite(: 5/5.
promising that person your love is true and ur never walk away...shows its real. so good <3

This is so good... I liked putting the last line in the little stars lol. This is so very sweet. My only suggestion would be on the line that says "Don't Ever Go." maybe add a please. But it was a great piece. Hope to read more. 5/5.

Great commitment and strong in feeling and emotion! awesome job!! 5/5 :-)