Comments : Look me in the eyes..

  • 12 years ago

    by fakingeverything

    I love it...

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you(:

  • 12 years ago

    by Owner of an Untamed Heart

    Superb !

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you sweetie(:

  • 12 years ago

    by ChrisT

    Great write your poems are getting better as you write the structure was improved good job :)

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    Dddaaannngggg!!! i love love love love LOVE IT!!! ESPECIALLY PARAGRAPH 3 AND 5!!! YOU TALENTED GIRL!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you Hun<3 Lovee you! (:

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Thank you so much jeet :)<3
    im still new to it but trying my best!
    and yeah i love him,but he doesnt deserve it!

  • 12 years ago

    by anjielblue

    You got it, don't waste your time to someone that never appreciate you...^_^' you deserve someone better...

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Great poem, I really liked reading it. I didn't find anything wrong with the poem. It flowed perfectly.

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Remember,
    what we once were,
    its all you can do now,
    all that's left are memories,
    of a boy and a girl,
    who once were in love,
    but now,
    nothing but a distant memory,
    that can never be again

    enchating all your poems seem to be sad or hurt felt would be nice to see a happy one from you x :D

  • 12 years ago

    by My Name Is Mouse

    Beautiful. Well done.