Comments : The Ride( Senryu)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    A nice senryu Connie, very well done.

    your friend, Tara-Kay.
    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    I really love Senryus, tho I suck at writing them lol :) , I love it so much, and I love how you used your imagination in such small form,
    a person who appreciates friendship, is someone who should be well trusted

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    I know that this challenge was a bit difficult since it is all about forms but you ROCKED!

    I agree with my Nana that this was really well-written:)
    and i agree and assure that you are really trustworthy! love you

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Amazin xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Acoustic Odyssey

    I loved how you said, "on a horse of trust". Although the relationship with the one you trust can run smoothly, it can also get quite a bit bumpy, and become questioned. Overall beautiful work, beautiful message.
    Take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Exquisitely Penned, Bravo!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    This is really excellent, the wording is just right for a short, Japanese format like this!

    well done, girl:)

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by yogi73

    Short and sweet!! I love this poem. I've read it like 10 times and it means 10 diferent things.