Oh, beautiful Noura, Perfectly worded. Amazing!!
Just spelling mistake in title,
love,
Tara
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Oh, beautiful Noura, Perfectly worded. Amazing!!
Just spelling mistake in title,
love,
Tara
x

I BELIEVE I AM SAFE TO DIE...
THE WORLD OF POETRY IS BEING TAKEN CARE OFF...

JEEZUS GIRL.

Hahahahha @ Yaki :p

this was dazzling!

You say too much.. and I fall to my feet:p

The opening was really different- the use of "embarrassment" gave me that feel that you've been holding this shame for a long time. This poem is really vivid "wind abducting me" and "sanity calling out your name" were profound revelations about this character. The lines kept getting stronger and I was drawn into this passion's tide. The only part I felt weak was a bit more weak was "then...we hug"- I felt the build up and then declining of this glorious moment you have thought of....... but felt it could have been written more elegantly without giving away the fact that the kiss was just a hug? Maybe, just my opinion dear...the ending was a bit mystifying, I liked the concept of it. Great thought I still can think of.

Maple Leaves of Tomorrow
By : Noura Hatem
(The Poetess)

This was the winning piece Noura, because it brought so much new meaning to the title and the character. This whole inner struggle between what your soul is wanting to forget and what you have seen through his failure, but you meet him only for a moment. Your phrases had class, flow and made this piece your own! The parenthesis, especially the ending of "liberate me", left me speechless- two words= profoundness. Like you have been left solo and his very existence takes away everything else you could live for. Good question words- eccentric and a fresh thought. Greatly intriguing with unique emotions that ride this poem

Congrats :)
MaryAnne

^ I apologize lol....just delete that first section, it was from your first poem entry, not this one. Sorry wrong one! Just look at the latter review :)