Obscure Crime

by Cinnamonspice   Aug 18, 2011


He towers above her tiny frame
tears blind her understanding
resolve begins to crumble.
Eyes plead forgiveness
to an obscure crime as
punishment is soon realized.

Escaping into the world of
her mind she endures silently.

Under blankets of sorrow
body bruised, spirit broken
she wonders why.
Drifting on clouds of refuge
peace embraces her with
dreams of safety.
.

Will tomorrow arrive on waves
of anguish? Or winds of protection?.

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  • 12 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    Another amazing piece. My favorite part
    'Escaping into the world of
    her mind she endures silently.'
    So very true and well said. I could relate to this alot as I'm sure others can too. Very well put together and had a very strong ending. Leaves you thinking and wondering and hoping not many pieces can do that. Hope to read more great pieces by you. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonerfully Penned, Bravo!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    Wow this is amazing well done connie 5/5 xx

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Great write..connie..

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