A moment unexplained

by Elizabeth   Aug 18, 2011


Elevating, intriguing thoughts, pass without a sound.
Lying, breathing gently, still upon the ground.
In my dream the storm stops, and begins to calm.
Zapping through like an electric shock, shooting through my palms.

Aching pains through my body, makes me wonder why?
Brutal pain can calm a soul, but make a heart just die.
Entering a place, somewhere no one can see.
Traps another persons mind, but sets another free.
Hearing and seeing emptiness makes me know that I am me.

I forgot to say I wrote this about 2 years ago and forgot it existed so I thought I would add it. there is actually something about the format of this poem I wonder if anyone will see it hope you enjoy :)

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  • 12 years ago

    by Dark Shadows

    Good One

  • 12 years ago

    by Maggie

    I really enjoyed reading this one, and i liked the rhythm of how it was put together.

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I loved it :) perfect 10 :) it was very intriguing 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    Emptiness makes me know that I am me.....I can relate...I liked the progression leading to emptiness...Sad but oh so true...5/5 Nice work (even if it's 2 yrs old...lol)

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Enjoyed it,honey

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