The rhyming was excellent. Very colorful and imaginative in your wording. I enjoyed the read
Connie

Really great piece, just had a great flow, and rhymes were excellent.
Loved it.
Love,
Tara-Kay

Aha! Gotcha! Hey friend, i know now, but I wont tell, let others have a look at it for themselves... anyways, about the whole poem, its an amazingly deep one, very well crafted. :D

Enjoyed it,honey

Emptiness makes me know that I am me.....I can relate...I liked the progression leading to emptiness...Sad but oh so true...5/5 Nice work (even if it's 2 yrs old...lol)

I loved it :) perfect 10 :) it was very intriguing 5/5

I really enjoyed reading this one, and i liked the rhythm of how it was put together.

Good One