Comments : Your Worst Creation

  • 6 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Ooooooooo i like it when you go dark, full of shadows and atmosphere . . . .loved it :-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Emmanuel Pineda

    Hello. I really liked your poem. Full of power. Great job.

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    OMGGGG
    give me a break! how did you come up with thaat ! hell this is very very not expect ble, the poem went easy, but u left the bomb for the ending!!!!!!!

    I love it so so so much, worth a nomination,
    how true, i can relate btw, i swear .I am you..in everything you do..
    how creative, how strong, how powerful and how SAD..really its sad!!!!!

    i was in a WOW..

    Who am I?

    I am a heart breaker,
    a fearless taker,
    a misery maker.
    ^
    impressive...made me look for whats the deal..
    makes u interested

    I am the darkness in your way,
    the sad song you always play,
    the bad things you always say.
    ^ LOVED this part so so much...

    I am the story that became true,
    since I reflect the devil in you,
    I am YOU in everything I do.

    ^
    u killed me with this..i cant even shut up, 3anjad worth reading ANd winning !
    next weeks nomi

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    Wow.. you really managed to interpret this eye-catching, captivating title in a simple, yet a fervent way.. overwhelming with Anger..Darkness!

    The rhyming triplets just gave way to a sizzling flow :)

    I LoOooOooVe ;)
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow, love this girl(:.
    Your an amazing writer, you can picture you being the devil inside the person!<3
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow, love this girl(:.
    Your an amazing writer, you can picture you being the devil inside the person!<3
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow, love this girl(:.
    Your an amazing writer, you can picture you being the devil inside the person!<3
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Wow, love this girl(:.
    Your an amazing writer, you can picture you being the devil inside the person!<3
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is really good I loved it :) 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by RSJ

    Allow me to say that this is your best peice
    a master peice
    you have totally surpassed yourself
    i've read this more than 10 times now and i still <3 it more everytime i read it,
    the lines you've weaved here are absoultly powerful, and it's true
    i congrulate you for this master peice
    rly
    5/5, a weekly winner in my openion
    and an A+, you've totally earned my respect.

  • 6 years ago

    by LoVerSLaND

    AWESOME GIrLy, 5/5 btw ur my fav author on here =)

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Amazing! I'm in awed. ^_^

  • 6 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    Nicely written. I liked it. The wording was good and it flowed nicely.

    gave it a 5/5