Comments : For Rania

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    OMG, I have no idea what to say for you Yaki! I have never expect someone to feel that way, you are one of those few sweeet ppl who I know over here and reading that about me, just left me speechless and overwelhmeddd..flattered, with a very stupid smile, from ear to ear!

    Thanks a lot :) I honestly do not deserves what you've written, i loved myself in your words, and felt as if I am being introduced to myself by the words of someone so sincere

    Oh Rania,

    what are you?
    where did you come from?

    ^
    .

    for you seem,
    to plant flowers upon my lungs
    (making it pleasant for me to breathe)

    ^

    i definitely do not deserve this lol!
    thank u, am touched i swear :)

    oh Rania,
    you have no idea what your poetry does to me..

    but,
    somehow,
    somewhere...

    you got under my skin.

    ^^
    and ofcourse i do not deserve that, my poetry is nothing more than my emotioal state and I am honored to know you appreciate my sadness oor happiness that way!

    thank you
    ppl will gossip as I nominated this from my clubs account, but i donu how else 2 show you how appreciated this piece of aamazing emotions is.

    i love u!

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    PS

    I am a burning sun
    and i come from a lost asteroid :D

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Great piece again, Yakzzz, worth a nomination BUT I wasted all of my votes, I should stop vote here and there and save them for the precious poems only :P
    welllllll, isn't this supposed to be under the friendship section??

    I loved your images esp. this:

    sometimes I wish,
    I could carve your name inside my ribcages
    so I always have you with me..

    VERY original!
    great write....5\5!

  • 6 years ago

    by Meme

    Oh god, if I ever would write a poem about nana, I can somehow imagine it like this one .. AMAZING Yakiiii. just superb ...

    for you seem,
    to plant flowers upon my lungs
    (making it pleasant for me to breathe)
    ^^
    Its known that plants, and flowers, bring a fresh breath of air when put in a room. Here as if you were comparing your lungs to a room that is filled with a nice fresh air, I loved the images in here :)

    still I dream,
    of one day holding your head between
    my hands,as if it was a lucky charm..
    ^^
    Very vivid image, had to read it more than once to absorb it.

    or a snowflake,perhaps.
    to press my lips upon your forehead
    (to thank you)
    ^^
    If we gather all the people in PnQ whom nana has affected in some way or another, she would get a million thank you's.

    A really amazing, simple, sincere poem yakii.
    Good job. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    :) even the comments will make me smile lol

  • 6 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Awww this is such a BEAUTIFUL and sweeeet poem!! I can see how Nana is sooo honored, and she truly deserved every kind word you've written about her!

    I loved it from beginning to end... loved the way you described how you wish you could carve her name in your rib cage! And the ending was perfect... I must agree with this poem.. Nana's poetry makes me feel the same way!!

    Well done :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    :)

  • 3 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    :]