Thank You

by Hallucinostic   Aug 24, 2011


Aphrodite, I ask of you,
spare just a second to look where love has gotten me into.
Through the years you've been so cold.
Though in my darkest hours you came and I struck gold.

You've healed away my pain,
given me someone who makes the sun rise when she calls out my name.
You do realize she has made a change?
But I'm glad my goddess, the jumbled pieces of my heart is now well-arranged.

Thank You.

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  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Clever write, and very sweet.

  • 4 years ago

    by LittleMsPink

    Sweet and romantic 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Elise Methot

    Really enjoyed this piece. You say it all and made me feel. Thank you

  • 6 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Such a delightful little piece to read.

    The flow was very good and the word selection was very appropriate for the subject.

    But you have left me gasping for more!

  • Through the years you've been so cold.
    Though in my darkest hours you came and I struck gold.

    ^^ loved these lines ^^

    The whole poem flowed very nicely and the only thing I can complain about is that it was not long enough!!
    Great expression. Very nicely written. (:

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