Asembo, This was very good.
I loved the use of the diary in this, it worked very well.

The flow was a little rocky at the end but that can be ammended by removing "still"

This was sweetly written, short but unique

love Tara-Kay

Aww this was really sweet and touching. I use to write in a diary till my dad found it LOL.

very simple but deep write.

Connie

^ I agree with connie :)

This was so very sweet, original, and flowing!!!

5/5

This is really creative and heart-felt 5/5

A very unique piece with writing diary entries of some. I think many of us cam relate to this on how we write maybe not always in a diary but somewhere our first loves, their beauty and how they make us feel. Beautiful yet simple to say the least.

Take care, Em