Comments : Tigress

  • 12 years ago

    by Liliana

    This is lovely, I like the way you describe this animal one of my favorites by the way 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I really liked this poem. It describes a tiger nicely and I find it to be true. The wording was great. There is nothing worth changing cause it is fine the way it is.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Oooh, I love this, you know me, the cat person so this I like very much. I think its roaring poem, lol. Very good write Connie. :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Connie,
    You did a wonderful job with just four lines, such a great piece of imagery here.
    lovely
    love
    Tara

  • 12 years ago

    by The Po whet

    I agree with Tara that you did a fabulous job on using imagery,that created a vivid picture of a tigress with the will to survive through the dangers of the jungle.
    You thought this write out well and it came out beautiful.
    Though I have a hunch that you were describing Connie the 'tigress'...
    It's just a hunch.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    With just four lines, I like the picture you have painted here with your words..liked the image...good job!

  • 12 years ago

    by silvershoes

    This is stunning, especially for such a short poem. Very well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Connie.

    You know I'm not supposed to comment on a poem that is in my contest, and the results aren't announced yet. That's CHEATING.

    But, I can't let myself but say, It is WILD like your writes :)

    Amazing.

  • 12 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow!! For a 4 lined poem, it has so much meaning and I liked it!!! I loved your choice of words... and the title.... and it was such an interesting topic! Great job!!! =D