Wow great!! u really have talent :) 5/5

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Beautiful once again,just every line..such poems always make me fall in love with the poet ..excellent 5 sweets for you..

It is a bit repetitive. The wording was good in some places but in others not so good. It is a good length. Maybe try splitting the one big stanza into a few different ones. It would help improve the flow of the poem.

gave it a 5/5

Another very well written poem, I just dont really like this kind of structure in poems, it is a bit long but the choice of words is really good, keep it up :)

I liked your poem, it has deep meaning to it. I see the journey you want to portray and you did it well. You used nice words and had great examples. What I would change is the spacing; it would be easier to read if it was spaced into 2 stanzas; the first would be the part of what you uses to think and the second how you are now, to show that you reflected upon it. I also don't like the repetition of the phrase "I found love in", keep one and then list the others below... keep writing!

It's a nice piece..we all go through many troubles because sometimes you know a person and you try your best just to make them happy and at the end they just leave you for another one,,for me my family is the best blessing god gave me coz at the end they're the only one which are ready to do anything for me especially my mother..nice job;)

Thanx 2 all my dearies 4 their precious time spent 4 me...thx..(:

Nice, a good length.
But it will be more helpful if it's separated into smaller stanzas. The reader will enjoy it more.

This poem is also really good, my favorite part was

"I searched for love in the midst of broken promises,
I searched for love in the aura of
misunderstandings,
I searched for love in the walk down memory lane,
I searched for love in the arms of distrust,
I searched for love in the eyes of jealousy,
I searched for love in the heart of betrayal,
I searched for love in the shedding of tears for that
special someone,
I searched for love in the rains of loneliness..."

this is something many people can relate to and it has a lot of meaning. 5/5

Awesome!

Wow, Truly Outstanding Poem. -
I Love It, I Have No Words.
You Are And Amazing Person, I Look Forward To Reading Your Poetry. You Would Be Supriced Of How Much I Actually Read On This Amazing Site.
You Are One Of My Favorite Writers, Darlin'.
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5/5

This is just beautiful and I had a strong connection with it. Keep up the brilliant work.