The one I said goodbye to

by Innocent Fairy   Sep 1, 2011


Forgive me if this if it is bad I forced it from an idea someone gave me... Ok well hope u enjoy :)

Spellbinding blue eyes,
Charming gentleman
Opening the door for me
Buying me things.
You were always
So sweet, caring
and kind.
Romantic
and never forced me
to do anything
that I didn't want to.
You always had a way
Of making me feel special.
I would lay in your arms
As you would hold me.
I was always happy
When you were around,
Never wanting you to
be gone for so long.
I thought we were meant to be,
I thought our love was true
but...
Our love was a phase
and we weren't meant to be.
Now you still linger in my heart,
What's wrong with me?
I've said goodbye.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    The flow was a little off but other then that it was great. Nicely worded. It is also a good length.

    gave it a 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Yup i completely 100% relate to this so much! Loved this poem, the emotion just pouring it out.

    Our love was a phase
    and we weren't meant to be.
    Now you still linger in my heart,
    What's wrong with me?
    I've said goodbye.

    Love this stanza, not knowing why you can't let go and loving and miss him so much you need him. You're such a good writer w emotion girl. Lovee ya(:
    5/5