Comments : The one I said goodbye to

  • 6 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Yup i completely 100% relate to this so much! Loved this poem, the emotion just pouring it out.

    Our love was a phase
    and we weren't meant to be.
    Now you still linger in my heart,
    What's wrong with me?
    I've said goodbye.

    Love this stanza, not knowing why you can't let go and loving and miss him so much you need him. You're such a good writer w emotion girl. Lovee ya(:
    5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Roses and lilys

    The flow was a little off but other then that it was great. Nicely worded. It is also a good length.

    gave it a 5/5