Queen's Dream

A dream i know well. but it seems all a bit too haunting when you pictures a specific person from your past. then you wake up from the dream and come back to reality. i'd rather just sleep away reality and live in my dream world where everything feels right again.

a wonderful write.

thank you for sharing

~Kuro

I could "Feel" this one. very nicely done! you write quite well Connie...great wordology I made that a word and My wife often calls me a wordologist, I think this one deffinately qualifies. 5's but thinks it should be 10'S.

Nice title. *winks*

The flow and rhythm of the poem is just perfect, as well as the cascade of emotions that pour from every lines. Loving the ethereal tone of this piece. :D

Wow Connie, this poem is so well-written... I loved the story you told within this poem, the title caught my eye and it was very intriguing. I loved your use of words, each word was the perfect choice, especially the use of the word "alabaster" .. I loved the dream, it was like a dream we've all had at some point.. and I like how in the end, she realizes it was just a dream which made it more realistic. Great job!!! 5/5

Beeeeeeeeeautiful it is ...loved it :)