Comments : Tears Of Love....

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow... Very very good :)
    wondering if someone will help me from above
    - love this :)
    Tears of pain run down my cheek,
    wishing I was able to hold the one I seek.
    -Awesome :) and I can relate :)

    I can't take this anymore, you've won,
    Tears run down my cheek, as I hold this gun.
    - I love this too :)
    It's all so very good :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Ms Happiness

    Ur always a gd writer :) 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by lovrgirl96

    Good poem I can relate exactly! As I hold this gun.. I've done that before. I feel ya :/