Well this was fantastic i like how i couldnt tell who wrote what bit you go well together i couldnt fault it very gd write

Wearily dazed by the light
of mercy and sympathy,
I accept her offering of
serenity wrapped in
the soft mantle of
understanding.

I love love this stanza and overall this poem is really good, great job you two :)

My gosh this is just .......lol amazing. Collabs are hard for me, but this was a perfect mix of talent.
I to love the last stanza , it took my breath away.
In fact my favorites were the first and last. :-) *standing applause bravo *

Connie

Great job both of you.
A lot of harmony and the thoughts are just amazingly connected. One can't tell that it's a collab. Unity and Coherence is what made this beautiful.. and well, lol, of course your creativeness :)

FIVE

It looks like this is the first poem out here which has totally gotten me speechless.forcing words out of my numb lips.in jst a word its flawless

This is a great work.. i am just speechless... i hard for me to find a word to comment this poem... this is fabolus.... i loved it... It has a nice flow and depth... i just want to read it again and again... your words are so powerful in it which make a perfect poem...:):)
Clarity pierces my heart,
removing the blinders of
confounding as I fall into
the depth of her eyes, basking
in the summer of her smile,
sheltered by angel wings.

I love this Stanza most..:):) great piece of work :) 5/5

I could see in my mind's eyes the picture you're trying to paint. It actually brings back some childhood memories...

Wow... this is one of the best collaborations I've ever read. I loved the title, and the entire poem... You both created such beautiful imagery with your words, and that is a true gift. I love that you alluded to Nyx, the goddess of the night, which makes the poem even more special. Great job to both of you!

Wow, you guys have done an great job. It is amazing. A well written collaboration is written seamlessly and that is exactly how this is. You guys can both write so well on your own, but together it really is something. Great job, to both of you.

This blew my mind, a collab of perfection. Not a flaw or rocky place, it was smooth as glass
I will definitely look for more from you both

That was a amazing poem i would love to do a part two to your poem and form a unit with you that way we can learn from one another

Wow you both did a beautiful job, I was actually thinking about writing about Nyx to go with my goddess directions I've taken off in. I can barely tell that this was a collab because you both wrote together beautifully and the flow was amazing.

5/5

-Heather

Sorry, Jenni! It submitted twice! xD Ugh...