Best Love Poem Ever

by Cinnamonspice   Sep 6, 2011


I have to tell you what I feel
emotions abundant syrupy and real
so here I go with words to describe
all the things that I now feel inside.
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Ah well gosh lets see--
I love you and
you feel good so...hmm
having trouble finding the
words..

Sooo Ok ok
aw you're awesome..no no that's
not good..you're fragrant as a flower
dumb ok uhm How about
Oh heck ---------
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I'll just say you're the one
that locks in my warmth
never stealing the sun.
Since my words get caught in
my throat, I'll just leave you with
the words that I wrote....

*I love you*

The idea for this poem was generated by Dib :-) thanks my friend love ya

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  • 12 years ago

    by Carissa

    This is super cute. I love the middle insert of you actually going through your thought process. Well written and enjoyable read (:

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    A Sweet Write, Nicely Done!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Matthew Schut

    Nice job on the poem! :) I loved it! Good work!

  • 12 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Lol, this was cute and funny.

    I often feel we talk to much about love and to our lover and should spend more time just loving;)

    Nice work, Connie!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 12 years ago

    by Sunshine

    You are just the cutest most incredible amazing person that I have ever met lol!
    this is sooooooooooo TRUE!!!

    wise bitterness :) XD

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