I have loved all you poems but there is something about this one that is very touching . It's done with such realism and compassion. Very nice
Connie

BOOM BOOM BOOM BOOOM BOOOM BASS YES SHE A SUPERBASS...

This reminds me of something I would write..
Although your word choice was extremly sexy.
you penned this piece with such grace It almost fell like someone was playing a piano indeed...you know how people play that instrument with such elegance and passion

it is exactly what I felt here..
You did good baby! glad you finally wrote something...

The simplistic nature of this,yet the complexity behind the emotions..
keep it all in balance...

what a breath of fresh air..

No over complicated metaphors,
no forced rhymes..no cheesy lines..

Just Noura and Her amazing poetry skills...

I LOVE THIS.

I defo agree with Yaki.
This write is so sexy and hot :)

It's so melodious and steamy.. original.. creative.. unique.. vivid :)

I would linger upon
my piano
composing your
existence
at every midnight.

^ OMG, you make me wanna say: OMG :)

I would age on
a balcony that sojourns
away from my dusky god
or my dusty shelf,

^ Another mouthwatering stanza :)
I really like how you make my heart go awww everytime you create something new.

Your voice talked here, I could listen you compose a poetic melody.

You have a way with openings.. with beginnings.. with every stanza.. You can make an overused word seem original..

If I only have ONE LEFT VOTE (I already used them all:)

FIVE

This is so beautiful, I love the images and it flows so will. You know I can not find any words to describe how much I like this. it's just so good.

I was passing by,but then I heard this melody,now I want to listen to it over and over again
(I mean the melody in the poems).
Noura this is lovely.

I love it when people mix music and poerty it fits so well ... love it noura x

Wow..just loved every word of it..i wish i could give more..but just 5 to give..

Noura, My dearest, amazing piece this is.
Just so original and worded brilliantly, oh my gosh, I am speechless, this was beautiful.
Loved it.
Tara
x x x x

I can only say how lucky I am to have found your opetry this night. I have enjoyed reading each one so far. They are jewels in my opinion. I can find some of my own style in them. Nicely done - bravo again.

This is one of my favorite from you. I've read it a few times and never had time to comment. I think it's beautiful and simple, but has so much emotion and really says so much more than a lot of your pieces. I think this is almost dreamy feeling and allows the reader to sink their toes into it, a sense of comfort. I like the use of dusty and dusky.. but the one part that tripped me up was 'banal love'. "Banal" sounds like such an ugly word (lol) for the rest of the tone of this piece. Point being it's too pretty for a weird sounding word ;)

I like your title, it fits perfectly with the poem but isn't boring. It caught my eye and set the tone immediately. Great write :)