Haahhahaha :p omg, I never expected that! AMAZING.
I'm really impressed 5/5

LOL
i was like
what the hell is she talking bout!?
and then FANS just popped up like i dunno hahaahhaahhahaahhaa
very creative lol:P

I was like slowly reading this poem thinking about how I know this feeling but I did not expect the end at all. I have to admit that the stanzas do not seem to flow smoothly together because, there doesn't seem to be a connection until you read the end. It's not as bad as it sounds now though. I like the idea and think that you found fiting words to describe the fan.

I found myself smiling throughout reading this poem
never expected the fan though haha!

Very good!

Hi! this was funny and very very good
and i totally agree with, The Poetess :) :)

On top of that it collects dust
all over it, in it.
Hope I'm not allergic!
- this was great and to me funny in some kind of smart butt way but that's just me anyways i love loved it :)

If I didn't have covers
I'd be an ice cube.
- this is my favorite but altogeter the poem was good :)

Ahahh...and here I was guessing what it was that was keeping you up! Liked the read and the surprisivg end..keep penning :)