Comments : Feelings of love

  • 12 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This poem is so strong. It shows your love towards him. i loved this . Nice work to expose your love . You have mixed you fear and love in such a nice way. Great work 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jessie

    I can feel the emotion in this poem.... But it felt like it was trapped behind the repetitive "I"'s and forced rhymes. Try writing without those and see what you come up with. aside from that, good description:)