Comments : You Lost Me

  • 12 years ago

    by lOsT sOuL

    This is really a sad poem.. but i love this.. poem full of true emotions and feelings.. which shows ur pain and ur hate towards him..:):) this is a great work ..:) i love this 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    "I haven't thought of you in a really long time
    Yet I find my self
    Missing you
    Hating you
    Remembering you
    I loved you"

    i loved it the most as no matter how much we fake that its ok n blah blah... bt sumwhr within...its hard to gt ovr wid it....
    otherwise also tho poem was fabulous <3

  • 12 years ago

    by believeinlove87

    Amazing(:
    You know i relate to this EVERY bit!

    It's time for me to move on
    So don't bother coming back
    because I won't be waiting.

    Love this<3. Finally realizing hes not worth it & that if he comes back you wont be there in the end.

    Emotion poured out girl.
    A favorite of mine :)
    10/10

  • 12 years ago

    by average thoughts

    It luks like, kinda letter, but i liked it..5 from me too gal..

  • 12 years ago

    by Dave

    Very good, very deep, I enjoyed it.

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love it.. it explains some of the stuff i feel for an ex of mine.. he cheated on me with two of my best friends,then played us against each other..Your an amazing writer also :D

  • 12 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    Good stuff. As Jacob Queen said majestic is a positive thing, but it was a good read all the same. I've written a few with the whole "Okay I'm done with it" kind of vibes. Much easier said than done, sadly.

  • 12 years ago

    by anonymous

    I love your poems! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by BlueJay

    Wow. Amazing piece, there is an excelleny example of personal style, and far too many different skills to praise you for, so instead I will comment on the basics. You have the emotion and pain down so well, and they really carry the piece. Your flow is far too basic, yet somehow it works for this piece. The final thing I will say about this piece is that I absolutely love it. Fabulous job

  • 12 years ago

    by Chevalier des Fleurs

    Another amazing and stunning write. Full of sadness and heartbreak, beautifully written. You inspire me to want to write in a similar style as you do. 5/5 Great job!