Aw it cute and sweet :}

This is a really well written poem, I like your choice of words and it is really relateable. I think that it flows well and has a good length.

If I'm not mistaken, diz iz ur 1st poem I m readin.. Yupp u hav kept it short ,yet sweet, cute, nyc1.... Keep it up...:)

Beautiful!!! :) 5/5

Very nicely written poem :)

all the best and take care