Comments : White and Cold

  • 6 years ago

    by Liliana

    This is adorable, like a kid waiting for snow, really cute

  • 6 years ago

    by Kips

    Lol...yeah..that's what I felt like

  • 6 years ago

    by Jenni

    I liked this poem and you managed to describe your feelings really well. I enjoy snow too and your poem made me want it to be a white christmas this year. Well done.

  • 6 years ago

    by Kips

    I hope you get a white Christmas too...

  • 6 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Wow... you know you created beautiful imagery in this poem... I love the snowww! I hate the cold, but there's something magical about snow... and you painted a lovely picture of my childhood.. it brought back lovely memories from my childhood and I just imagined myself playing in the snow again, making snow angels and sledding down a hill! I loved the nostalgic feeling it gave me. Beautiful description of a lovely time. Well done :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kips

    I'm glad I could bring back to your mind those precious moments of yours. Sometimes you just want to become a child once again...

  • 6 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I like it :D
    remember the first time my niece seen snow.. :D made my heart melt :)
    well written

  • 6 years ago

    by Kips

    Lol...sweet memories