Comments : IS IT OVER (partially acrostic)

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    I am truly speechless... This poem is strong,meaning,heartfelt and touching, inspiring ummm really good I loooovveedd it :) :) 20 stars
    Great length and awesome wording everything was more than words for me and idk it was sooooo great fantastic job and everything words can't say :) :) <3***<3 =} 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    Well you put everything into this one;-) emotions were powerful, flow and theme was excellent. I'm not good at lengthy poems but you never missed a beat. Well done

    Connie

  • 12 years ago

    by luminous wonder

    Wow this is amazing! I find acrostic poems one of the hardest poems to write but you have turned this creation into a wonder and have made words come to life with depth and inner meaning that the heart can express. I loved the selection of words about the inner war we each face it takes the reader on a journey into the life you live and express so well... Thanks for sharing such true talent!
    5/5 from me