A soul's winter

by Jenni   Sep 17, 2011


Whenever a heart
bursts asunder
a noxious drop falls
and unseals our
souls' winter.

Now snow conceals
the dull medley of
feelings and damps
the sounds so that
serenity may comfort us.

Beneath frozen land
vitality and hope concentrate,
melting the ice in order that
spirited plants may arise.

Bad weeds grow tall,
but have confidence
in these buds,
they will blossom
and reveal your dreams.

Sacrifice your credulity,
draw hope from this melody
and know that you overcome
souls winter.

    report violation
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  • 12 years ago

    by xoxShorteexox

    Amazingly penned with beautiful imagery fitting the poem.

    5/5

    -Heather

  • 12 years ago

    by Jess

    This is a breathtaking poem, I dont know how you mannage to captivating me jsut by reading a few words. Thats the affect of poetry, and you have a great grasp on this. You have talent in general, and you portrayed your talent through this poem.
    Great Work.
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenna Bella Oldridge

    There was something musical about this. It felt like I was reading lyrics. I found this poem to be different yet likeable.

    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by The Queen

    I saw this piece earned nominations but I have something to point, and I hope you won't mind me posting this.

    A souls winter by Jenni

    ^ A soul's winter/Souls Winter

    and unseals our
    souls winter.

    ^souls' winter.

    credulity,
    ^ I love this word though, totally fits with the theme of this piece.

    I loved the clarity in this piece, from the line formation and its vocab. Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by Brittany C

    I liked it. You got your point across. The wording was good and it was a good length.

    gave it a 5/5

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