This poem is completely awesome and I loved reading it...in a way I can relate and u described very well and very well written... Fantastic job
Ur poems are always so great :) :) 10 stars 5/5

This was quite a good piece ... the flow was rocking in bits but nothing major the only thing id say is the first two lines using the same end word ... but overall pretty good write

Such a sad piece you've penned here! I loved how each line and title connect with each other. The flow and rhythm were stunning probably because of its perfect rhyme. Good job!

I can't think tonight, no witty comment or suggestion. I'll just say great job all the way round.

Connie

Wow..beautifuly written..jus evry line is hrtfelt..5/5

This is absolutely beautiful!!!!!!
every line is just soo nice
i completely loved reading this!!!
5/5

Nicely done, this read smooth as silk with not flaws or choppy places. Awesome