Comments : Fire and Ice A love Story

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    This was so well written, a great collab, and such honest words and awesome imagery.
    The flow was spot on and the rhymes flowed well into each line, what a lovely piece of work

    Love Tara-Kay

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Now this is a poem with spark. A lot of poems are written featuring the moon and sun but you did an original and brilliant piece with this.
    Hey where's Dibs so I can comment?

    Well done guys

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    WOW! You both are awesome. Some chemistry, I can see.. Harmony, Melody, and each stanza flowed in sync with the other.

    It felt great, all your images, and The final stanzas hit the road so darn good
    :)

    CONNIE & DIB.. keep writing XD

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    Awesomeness......

  • 6 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    This was awesome u go together really well well done to both of you x

  • 6 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Hey guys:
    Wonderful and arousing sol-luna love poem. Some stanza's could look better when reworded and rearranged, perhaps (just my opinion). But, the thoughts are what matter, a superb piece of collab. Congratulations. Nominated. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    This is by far the most easiest poem Ive ever written, I really felt comfortable writing this with you Connie, lol, besides, I knew in the end, things will be awesome regardless of what I write because I got you as a partner i this, even if I wrote "Crappy luna, youre crap, cause your light is crap and all crappy" like that, lol. Thank you Connie, youre such a dear. Love you. :D

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A collaboration of two poets. A collaboration of two minds, to distill such an exception of vivid and creative composition which unifies elegance and tranquility. Nice job.

  • 6 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    What a stunning collab! Just took my breath away :)) I loved it .. Its just so beautifully written and an Excellent job.

    WELL DONE BOTH OF YOU!

  • 6 years ago

    by No1ButMe

    I loved reading this. I also loved how you used 'bella luna' for beautiful moon. The flow was elegant and yet you could see the conflict between moon and sun. It also had some great detail. All in all a very pleasant read. Beautiful. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very Nice!!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Liliana

    Could you guys make this any better, I dont think so, this is awesome, great job you two :)

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen

    Nice imagery you have here, you two. Now I've got a perfect excuse to work on my rhyming skills. Loved the repetition as well, perfect diction and overall effect.

    keep rocking, you two!

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen

    Nice imagery you have here, you two. Now I've got a perfect excuse to work on my rhyming skills. Loved the repetition as well, perfect diction and overall effect.

    keep rocking, you two!