Comments : Fire and Ice (a love story)

  • 6 years ago

    by nourayasmine

    You are right.....that was awesome.....
    awesomely aesome! :D

  • 6 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Yes! I commented on this on Connie's, and I'll say the same, it is amazing, the flow and rhyming is perfect and the words just jump right out at me.
    Love Tara-Kay

  • 6 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    I want to thank you for doing this awesome poem with me. You're the sweetest friend a girl could have and I enjoyed writing this with you.

    You're like the moon and sun, always there 'Love you my friend

  • 6 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    You two made an original poem of nature, blended with love. An eloquent poem, sensual, and delicate in emotions. Well done guys

  • 6 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    Hey guys:
    Wonderful and arousing sol-luna love poem. Some stanza's could look better when reworded and rearranged, perhaps (just my opinion). But, the thoughts are what matter, a superb piece of collab. Congratulations. Nominated. 5/5

  • 6 years ago

    by Decayed

    WOW! You both are awesome. Some chemistry, I can see.. Harmony, Melody, and each stanza flowed in sync with the other.

    It felt great, all your images, and The final stanzas hit the road so darn good
    :)

    CONNIE & DIB.. keep writing XD

  • 6 years ago

    by L

    Pretty good!

  • 6 years ago

    by Exostosis

    A collaboration of two poets. A collaboration of two minds, to distill such an exception of vivid and creative composition which unifies elegance and tranquility. Nice job

  • 6 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Heey.... What a stunning collab! Just took my breath away :)) I loved it .. Its just so beautifully written and an Excellent job.

    WELL DONE BOTH OF YOU!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    I felt it...

  • 6 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This poem has such a delicate touch of love to it..so fragile yet so beautiful. Loved the flow and the meaning in this..good job :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Renegade Angel

    Such beautful features, it reminded me of my favorite book series, and i see the flow and beauty pouring out. Wonderful!

  • 6 years ago

    by hannah kershaw

    This is the best poem ever:)

  • 6 years ago

    by hannah kershaw

    This is the best poem ever:)

  • 6 years ago

    by Liliana

    Could you guys make this any better, I dont think so, this is awesome, great job you two :)

  • 6 years ago

    by The Queen

    Nice imagery you have here, you two. Now I've got a perfect excuse to work on my rhyming skills. Loved the repetition as well, perfect diction and overall effect.

    keep rocking, you two!

  • 6 years ago

    by Carissa

    Beautiful (:

  • 6 years ago

    by neon sunset

    It's so beautiful. it's very unforgettable and it painted a soft watercolor master piece in my mind.

  • 3 years ago

    by Dancing Rivers

    Très belle, very beautiful you two, your words took me into the love story